The factors I had lacked in my essay is
expanding on points I mention, for example when explaining the feminist point
in one part I did not go into depth what I had meant, I will need to categorize points in sociological perspectives in order to clarify my explanation.
Another section I did not do well in is my
conclusion, when concluding my ideas I will need to sum up all the ideas in a
clear and concise way – for example points such as the opinions stated or the
theorists mentioned. In order to have
this I will need to make a detailed plan that I can refer when doing my essay,
this will enable me to have a more structured and comprehensive piece of work.
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